perfect poetry

Every once in a while you stumble across something that just works so damn well you can’t hardly believe it. I had one of those experiences the other day; what seemed especially fascinating to me was the fact that I’d had this particular piece of ‘perfect poetry’ in my possession for quite a number of years, and while I’d enjoyed it, it had never really struck me the way it did when I stumbled back across it a few days ago.

The object in question is a song by the Eels, Daisies of the Galaxy, from the album of the same name.

Every once in awhile music can do this; pure, simple, and as close to perfection as I need.

The entire album version of the song is the last media item on the page, the others are the verses pulled off a live performance and placed here to highlight my ranting about why this song works so damn well.

enjoy

Daisies of the Galaxy

the opening lines are comforting,
perhaps even conspiratorial

soon we’ll be far away, far from the street
where you learned how to be not what you are

implicit in my understanding of the song is this notion that “the street” or perhaps ‘mother culture’ is twisting about the human psyche in ways that it does not enjoy being twisted, the concept of fleeing, of actually making good some form of escape from a culture grown monstrous is far more comforting than the admonishment to “take heart”

americana, a small town with run-down accommodations
“a little motel and an old movie house”
this is what we seek, entertainment and rest

we’ll go to a movie,
whatever it is

i’d love to just say Steppenwolf (the novel not the band)
because this plays in with the ‘Magic Theater’ of the novel,
and on top of that the concept of – having nothing else to do, we must attend
the movie, regardless of whether we enjoy it or not

as we sit, entertained and un-participating, the cracks in our world
grow larger and more ominous

watching the movie
the world’s gonna end

there is nowhere you can hide

of course it’s called the “galaxy theater”
this is where we are, on this earth, in this universe,
with this strange culture and the personal desires
that said has fostered as we interact with it

i’ll pick some daisies from the flower-bed
of the galaxy theater while you clear your head . . .
i thought some daisies might cheer you up

daisies represent simplicity, innocence and perhaps even purity

what makes this beautiful is the concept of gathering flowers,
which are ephemeral and fragile,
to lend cheer to someone who would appear to have lost hope,

i’ve also been quite amused using this as a symbol for the whole
‘hippie’ generation, but to tell you the truth most of that movement
moves me in much the same way that the end of this song does . . .

a beautiful, and touchingly naive gesture made perhaps more powerful
for being as fleeting as it is . . .


link to amazon so you can buy the album

4 Responses to “perfect poetry”

  1. J R Mortland III (Bob) Says:

    Amazing poetry

  2. HepKitten Says:

    I hope you’re pulling this stuff out for lyrics, because that’d be awesome.

  3. WILFRED JOHN Says:

    Somewhere I had lost it
    And I’m really not sure how
    I didn’t even know it
    At least not till now

    Then you came into my life
    Never knowing what you had found
    That thing that I had lost
    You found it on the ground

    I could never thank you
    For bringing it back to me
    Because since that day my smile
    Is what you gave back, you see

    My smile is never ending
    And that’s because of you
    You brought it back into my life
    With all the things you do
    Wilfred john/13 /1/2005
    http://www.poemhunter.com/wilfredjohn

  4. WILFRED JOHN Says:

    Dreams don’t always come true
    and that I have to accept.
    But you were so much better
    than all the rest.
    You always cared
    and you always loved.
    You were always there
    when push came to shove.
    I wanted so badly
    to have you near.

    But it’s someone else
    who you hold dear.
    “Persist” you once told me
    “Because your dream might come true”.
    But when you gave me this advice
    did you know that my dream was you?
    Sometimes I think you did
    But then I’m not so sure.

    It doesn’t really matter anyway
    because your advice I chose to ignore.
    How could I persist
    once I knew the truth?
    I couldn’t even pretend to not know
    because you’d given me the proof.
    I dealt with it the best I could
    and tried to hide my feelings from you.

    But deep down inside of me
    I am sure that you still knew.
    So now I just sit and wait
    and check the mail each day.
    I hope that you are home real soon
    because it’s been lonely with you away.

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